Saturday, February 18, 2012

Third Blog

I believe I will be writing my research essay toward those you are avid drinkers of tap water. I know this is pretty much everyone but just to show how much healthier filtered water in your fridge rather than the sink. I think this is a great topic dealing with our current time because a lot of studies are being performed on it and it has become a major health issue today. I care a lot about this topic well one because, I care about my health and my mom's health and I'd like to see what the effects of drinking tap water are in the long run. Is that why so many people have cancer? I think high school teachers were more focused on us getting to the point with our writing and being able to make a piece, well it was more like our citations write our essays, rather than us just use the sources as supporting details. I think college teachers are having us more focus on the content of our writing and just using our sources as examples and not having us write our piece. I am not really seeing any other viewpoints at this time because I am focusing more on the health effects on the bad side rather than it helping our health. I am planning on researching as we discussed before about how healthy is tap water verses bottled. One new interesting thing I learned was that one of the studies I have found actually was done not too far from my house and that was probably the same water I was drinking where they found that many people have been diagnosed with liver problems and some even having cancer. That is very concerning to me because I have enough family history of cancer and health issues and I don't need another. Finally, I am going to be following Collette's Blog about sleep deprivation and health.

1 comment:

  1. Anthony,
    I think this is a great topic. I have been wondering about this as well. I think it is a good idea to research whether water is better at some places than others and why. You might want to include sparkling water as well..
    Good job!

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